Please read my poem-tell me what you think?

I am not one of those people that look for poems to criticize..I read this and I see the level you are on and your percentage of best answers..so I figure you are serious..First I am not really good with obscure meanings in poetry..Having said that..I don't get the meaning of what you are saying..It doesn't make much sense ..to me..Maybe another poet can do better than me..I will star it and hopefully another will read and comment..Sorry, I just don't get it!!