What do you think of my Pagan poem, "Invokers of the Sun"?

Even if it wasn't Pagan it's really good. I mean no one should disrespect another's religion. Because if you look deep enough at many religions, a lot of them have roots in another religion. Like Christianity a lot of the things Christian's believe in are Pagan. Christmas and Easter. Christmas is actually the Pagan/Wiccan sabbath Yule. And I forget what Easter was. I'm pretty sure it's Ostara or however you spell it. I didn't know if you knew that. And Christianity only dates back 2000 years if you get technical. But for the sake of the question yes your poem is very good.